Sunday 20 March 2011

Story Excerpt 1 of 2

I have been writing a story, and thought I would share some of it. It is a story about a boy who falls in love with a girl in his Physics class, but it takes forever for a move to be made. It is loosely based on a true story. I won't say if its me, but I was there for all of the events in the true story.

Meeting Again

Oliver walked upstairs from his French class and started searching for his Physics class. He finally reached the door where something in his life would change greatly, he was about to learn physics. Oliver walked in, but could not find a seat anywhere. All the seats in the room were set up so the class would sit in pairs. He knew that he did not want to sit alone, but he did not want to sit with anyone that would drag him down. Oliver stood there and pondered for a moment. He got it, he would sit at an empty table and hoped that one of his friends would be in the same physics class.

Oliver sat and waited while the room filled. Yet none of his friends were coming in. Oliver thought, “ They all probably have the afternoon class.” Just at that moment, a girl walked in. She had long dark hair with a purple stripe in it, her jeans were tight, and she wore a bright red top. Oliver had seen this girl before, but this time was different. His breathing sped up, his face was flushed, and his hands were two pools of water. His seat was the only one left, and the girl began to walk towards him. She sat down next to him. Oliver mustered all the strength he had to say “Hello, I’m Oliver.” She responded “Sup, I’m Penny.”

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