Saturday 21 May 2011

my unfinished script 3

As the punch kicks in, Jillian begins to self destruct inside from her confused feelings for Nelly. She is now stumbling around the room mumbling different little saying that no one can seem to understand. Little did an unexpected bystander know that his night would soon turn into the way that Jillian felt.

DERRICK
(Grabbing Jillian and sitting her down)
Jillian, calm down!
Nelly just called me and said he is on his way.

JILLIAN
(In an angry uproar)
Man forget Nelly, he isn’t anything to me anyway.

BUDDHA
Wow. You always are complaining about something.
And you always got your mouth open, just like your mother.

JILLIAN
He doesn’t care about me.
That’s why he not here with me.